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10/06/2014 20:31:29

video567
video567
Posts: 97
So , i am playing with muvizu a lot. I am learning voice overs, timing, camera cuts, character dialog and movements...wow so much to do and so much fun. I created a 2 minute commercial. It is in Spanish. i would love for you guys to review it. Even if you don't speak Spanish. I could use critics on camera cut, movements actions, any thing you can recommend. Ive already created a bunch of different characters for a project i want to do in the near future. plus years ago i did stand up comedy and my goal is to use my character and record my comedy and use it to showcase it.

As i stated before I am retired Air Force and I have nerve damage so even doing a few minutes of work is complicated, but this has been a tremendous therapy to keep my mind and body in check. this little program has helped me not go nuts staying at home, since i cant work. I really want to thank MUVIZU and the members here because i truly have a new output in life.

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10/06/2014 23:14:21

ziggy72Muvizu mogulExperimental user
ziggy72
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Pretty good first attempt, hangs together okay - unfortunately your volume goes from okay to DEAFENING at 39 seconds in, but sound is tricky within Muvizu (a video editor is something you'll need later, we have all found). I'd advise you to experiment with the lighting and shadows too, to get some more depth and definition in there. And welcome aboard
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11/06/2014 00:04:52

video567
video567
Posts: 97
ziggy72 wrote:
Pretty good first attempt, hangs together okay - unfortunately your volume goes from okay to DEAFENING at 39 seconds in, but sound is tricky within Muvizu

thank you yes i should have listened to it after it rendered. its freaking loud for sure. than you for the imput

edited by video567 on 11/06/2014
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11/06/2014 18:18:57

muvizu_chapMuvizu staff
muvizu_chap
Posts: 82
This is promising, you've definitely mastered the basics. And we're really glad that our software is more than a bit of fun for you. Any questions on how to improve the audio fire away, myself and I'm sure everyone else here will be able to share some tips.
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24/06/2014 10:41:28

DoublePrimePictures
DoublePrimePictures
Posts: 66
Good first attempt. I'm curious what else so coming from you.
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26/06/2014 07:16:58

devious
devious
Posts: 20
Hey there 'Fly Boy', thank you for your service from a fellow retired 'Jarhead'.

I agree this was excellent use of the software for your first attempt. The volume
increase was an issue and you also could have made better use of the lighting options
Try to add some shadows to create depth to your environment.

I understood every word even though you are a 'Boriqua'. I'll hit that place up the
next time I'm in Houston.

Adios amigo, Devious
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26/06/2014 07:30:32

video567
video567
Posts: 97
thank you so much! i deployed with the navy and marines. net some awesome jarheads....thanks for the comments ive been mainly making new textures and figures instead of concentrating in directing. im just trying to learn the software little by little. i have some ideas for my next one so lets see how it turns out. it has to wait till i come back from camping with the wife. but i appreciate it!!!
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