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31/07/2016 00:18:13

tonyob67
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This is the extended version of the video I made for the competition...I hope you like it
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03/08/2016 18:32:43

PatMarrNCMuvizu mogul
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Hi Tony,

I like this a lot. The long version fills in all the gaps that were created when you shortened it for the contest. Therefore, this version flows a lot better. Great premise, and I like the way you threw the audience a curve at the end.

I also like the plane you used in this version.
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03/08/2016 19:30:13

tonyob67
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Thank you... means a lot to me, coming from you.
I did not shortened the video, I aded scenes and make some other longer, the original video is the short one.
The plane and the boat ... I finally figured how to export from SketchUp thanks to you and the other experts help.

Best regards
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03/08/2016 20:00:25

PatMarrNCMuvizu mogul
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tonyob67 wrote:
Thank you... means a lot to me, coming from you.
I did not shortened the video, I aded scenes and make some other longer, the original video is the short one.
The plane and the boat ... I finally figured how to export from SketchUp thanks to you and the other experts help.

Best regards


ooooh, OK.. that makes sense. Yes, the added details made a big difference! Good job!

And I forgot to mention the boat... not only a good import job, but I also like the way you framed the shots. The first thing I look for in a video is to see how the scene is framed in the camera. You have a good sense of design... your scenes look like they could have been story boarded.
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03/08/2016 22:06:59

tonyob67
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Thank you Pat...I could not find the meaning of stoy boarded
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03/08/2016 22:27:16

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tonyob67 wrote:
Thank you Pat...I could not find the meaning of stoy boarded

A storyboard is a usually sequence of annotated drawings used to plan a film scene.
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03/08/2016 22:35:36

tonyob67
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No, it's all in my head
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03/08/2016 23:27:00

PatMarrNCMuvizu mogul
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http://nofilmschool.com/2016/07/watch-whats-key-creating-high-quality-films-and-videos
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