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18/04/2016 22:48:15

Toschek
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Thank Muvizu, my first "real video" from the band Toschek with the song "Lost in Music". I hope you enjoy it.

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19/04/2016 01:00:20

PatMarrNCMuvizu mogul
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Awesome video, Thorsten! You have a lot of interesting things going on here...

1) first of all I like that you didn't just put your band on a stage ... I really like the approach you used of depositing your musicians along a path in the desert where they are revealed one at a time as the chick singer marches past... very clever!

2) at the 0:43 and 1:24 markers I notice all 4 characters are walking in beat with the song! That looks very cool, and I would like to know how you accomplished that!

3) the fades between scenes are effective and they add interest

4) I thought the cameos between the 1:52 and 2:18 markers worked well as a change-up from the other previously used footage

5) I thought the video was well cast character-wise... the female character exudes the attitude that such a song requires

I liked so much about this that I almost hate to comment on the fact that you reused several of the same scenes multiple times... considering the high click-away rates on youtube, repeating any scenes at all sets you up for viewers to leave before the video ends. One very simple solution would be to use the same moves but recorded from different camera angles. That would accomplish the need for visual interest without requiring you to create a bunch of new scenes.

suggested camera angles for the same scene:
overhead, ground level, panning camera, view from the front, rear and both sides

But art is highly subjective, and I wouldn't put too much stock in anybody's opinion, especially mine. My opinion says more about my preferences than it says about the quality of your video.

Bottom line, I liked this video a lot! Thanks for sharing it with the community here on Muvizu! I look forward to seeing more from you!
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19/04/2016 17:33:10

mrmuviz
mrmuviz
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Great video, love her voice.

I was wondering if you have a light shade for that lamp?

Hesh
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19/04/2016 18:07:59

Toschek
Toschek
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Hello PatMarrNC,

I hope that we can communicate through the Google Translator somewhat understandable.

First: I thank you for the constructive criticism. This I find very valuable, because that one gets as an artist and a look to the other side.
I have to admit, the video could have been better.

But: I am a very impatient person. Having worked just four weeks for songwriting and mixing, of course I wanted the video have done as soon as possible.

But I promise, in the interests of Muvizu future to invest more time in the video, because the possibilities are unique.

It is not only a good software, but also a good support.

Thank you
PatMarrNC and Muvizu




By the way: One of my inspirations was a video from the 80s: Massive Attack - Unfinished Sympathy, only Muvizu unfortunately has no track of 5 minutes.

@PatMarrNC - The trick with the rhythm = 140 bpm
edited by Toschek on 19/04/2016
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