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23/03/2014 00:56:11

InsaneHamster
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So here is a little sneak peak at a project I am working on. It's going to be a series of short jokes turned into videos. I can't seem to come up with a good name for it though.

Anyways this one is called Cannibals. Two Cannibals are having a discussion.

As always I welcome your feedback. So please let me know if you see something I can improve upon.

Thanks for watching
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23/03/2014 02:54:43

primaveranz
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Nice lighting and modelling and the idea could work for a series but, TBH you need to find newer jokes and cut down on the fluff. The joke only takes up around 15 of the 84 secs. Tighten her up and give her some new fuel and she could be a runner
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23/03/2014 11:28:06

InsaneHamster
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Thanks primaveranz. The series will be once a week ranging from knock knock jokes to 3 guys walk into a bar.

So the fluff is added to help make the videos a tad longer than what it would be. I am thinking of maybe two to three jokes per episode. Sort of a variety show feel is what I am aiming for. Still in the works but do have a few skits done and ready.

Thanks for the feed back Prim greatly appreciate it.
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23/03/2014 18:25:43

primaveranz
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InsaneHamster wrote:
.. I am thinking of maybe two to three jokes per episode...


Yeah that would be better - five would be better still But you'd go through your material pretty fast.

Good luck!
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23/03/2014 22:04:44

urbanlamb
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fun stuff mr hamster try looking up the Yo' momma jokes might give you an idea of how to do one joke per episode. This one is set up way better then the last one so getting there
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24/03/2014 01:17:18

InsaneHamster
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Thanks Urban I have thought about some your momma jokes. I have really been studying lighting lately, and was hoping it would show. Also been working on better recording and all that jazz.

Now if I can just iron out the name and stuff, that has been bugging me. Seems I hit a brick wall. But thanks for the feed back
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24/03/2014 02:47:14

octo-crab
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How about "A Joke a Day," or "Classic Comedy," or "Insert Title Here." Actually, that last one seems pretty good.
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24/03/2014 05:37:47

primaveranz
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octo-crab wrote:
How about "A Joke a Day," or "Classic Comedy," or "Insert Title Here." Actually, that last one seems pretty good.


Wow! That was a short break from the site, octo-crab.
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24/03/2014 11:20:18

InsaneHamster
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lol thanks Octo, I ddin't even get to post on your goodbye post and your already back lol. This place is like crack. it's addicting.

But thanks for the ideas I appreciate it very much.
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24/03/2014 13:53:08

ziggy72Muvizu mogulExperimental user
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Yup Hamster, better vid, good job But are you sure you really want to tell people "let me know if you see something I can improve upon" because, in my experience, there's always something you can improve upon. Usually you'll see it as you're doing it, some you don't spot till it's finished, some you only spot after you think you've finished, and some you don't know about at all until someone points it out to you 6 weeks later... But hey, if you like the feedback we'll keep chipping in, I'm just sayin' is all
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24/03/2014 16:17:41

urbanlamb
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yeah what ziggy said I always after I think I am done and release whatever pixels it is on the world find like 5 things the day after humans are not perfect beings
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25/03/2014 00:32:37

InsaneHamster
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ziggy72 wrote:
Yup Hamster, better vid, good job But are you sure you really want to tell people "let me know if you see something I can improve upon" because, in my experience, there's always something you can improve upon. Usually you'll see it as you're doing it, some you don't spot till it's finished, some you only spot after you think you've finished, and some you don't know about at all until someone points it out to you 6 weeks later... But hey, if you like the feedback we'll keep chipping in, I'm just sayin' is all



Lol Ziggy. You just reminded me of my old high school art teacher. She use to tell us that art is never completed.

But seriously I know I can't please everyone but I believe in order for one to advance their skills they need to know what they need to improve and the only way to do that is to get feedback.. SO lay it on me lol

I'm glad you guys can see improvement. So that should also be a complement to you all as well. That someone is taking what advice you give and putting it to use. So thanks guys and gals
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25/03/2014 00:45:22

octo-crab
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InsaneHamster wrote:
lol thanks Octo, I ddin't even get to post on your goodbye post and your already back lol. This place is like crack. it's addicting.

But thanks for the ideas I appreciate it very much.



I'm not leaving really, I'll only come on not so often. I posted that right after the goodbye. I'm posting this because I just got home. octo-crab out!
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25/03/2014 15:02:28

Wizaerd
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primaveranz wrote:
Nice lighting and modelling and the idea could work for a series but, TBH you need to find newer jokes and cut down on the fluff. The joke only takes up around 15 of the 84 secs. Tighten her up and give her some new fuel and she could be a runner



I really have to agree about the fluff. As I was watching it, just watching these two characters looking around for so long before either of them said anything, I almost just hit the Stop button. You need to grab your audience fairly quickly, today is the ADHD society and will rarely wait beyond 5 - 10 seconds unless there's something that grabs them immediately. Sure there are much longer videos with a high number of views, but they're typically passed around by word of mouth, or there's some clear indication something intriguing will be happening.
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26/03/2014 00:45:04

InsaneHamster
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Wizaerd, Thanks for the feedback. I see what you are saying and it makes sense. I will have to remember that for future episodes.
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