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23/03/2014 00:56:11

InsaneHamster
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So here is a little sneak peak at a project I am working on. It's going to be a series of short jokes turned into videos. I can't seem to come up with a good name for it though.

Anyways this one is called Cannibals. Two Cannibals are having a discussion.

As always I welcome your feedback. So please let me know if you see something I can improve upon.

Thanks for watching
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23/03/2014 02:54:43

primaveranz
primaveranz
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Nice lighting and modelling and the idea could work for a series but, TBH you need to find newer jokes and cut down on the fluff. The joke only takes up around 15 of the 84 secs. Tighten her up and give her some new fuel and she could be a runner
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23/03/2014 11:28:06

InsaneHamster
InsaneHamster
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Thanks primaveranz. The series will be once a week ranging from knock knock jokes to 3 guys walk into a bar.

So the fluff is added to help make the videos a tad longer than what it would be. I am thinking of maybe two to three jokes per episode. Sort of a variety show feel is what I am aiming for. Still in the works but do have a few skits don